Grossmont College Rhetorical Analysis of Watchmen Reflection Paper

If you submitted a rough draft of Essay #2, please review the feedback you were left by your peers carefully. Similarly, if you met with me for a conference or during office hours, think about what we discussed. Make a checklist, in your own words, of 3-5 things you can work on and why when preparing Sunday’s final draft of Essay #2.

If you did not submit a rough draft, you can still complete this assignment by thinking about what you need to do and creating a checklist.

Your reflection should be 75-150 words. Please simply type directly into the text box for this assignment rather than uploading a Word document. Be sure to use 14pt font here since it is way easier to read in text box mode, which is a bit smaller than a regular Word document, and use complete sentences. Bullet points are OK. You can earn up to 3 points for this reflection.

I have submitted my rough draft

This is response I got from my classmate

“Hey Marvee, you have a pretty good layout already for your essay! A few things would just be putting it together in MLA format, adding citations, and pictures for the examples/evidence you had presented. I liked the assumptions you had incorporated in your essay, maybe adding a bit more evidence to each body paragraph would make it even better. Good job so far!”

“Hello Marvee, I enjoyed reading your essay and I think you have a great start! Your introduction is clear and well-written and your thesis directly answers the prompt. I would just try to add more pictures or citations as evidence in your body paragraphs as it is required and it helps the reader understand the argument you are trying to make. Overall, great job, and good luck the rest of the way!”