American University of Science and Technology Fashion Luxury Industry Essay

First: Think about the sequence/order of this piece. After the summary page, should we instead see Challenges before Solutions? Seeing a recycling header before the challenges header. Should the sections instead be: executive summary, challenges (w/ recycling), solutions (existing solutions w/in the recycling space), recommendations (for next steps in recycling solutions)? The sections still feel a little all over the map and I’m looking for a little more focus here to connect all the sections.

Second: be clearer re: our asks/recommendations of the Sustainable Fashion Forum in the recommendations section? I’d love to see very clear asks/recommendations re: next steps and what you want the industry to do.

Think about the audience and what’s going to motivate them to act here and what specifically we would like them to do.