Please follow the rubric step by step, also make sure you explain the Rhetorical strategy and Appeal on how they connect back to the claim/main argument. Some Rhetorical strategies or appeals may not be correct as they do not correlate with the quote I picked, so please make sure they make sense. Last, my Rhetorical situation and overall argument need a lot more too it and needs to be polished, so just make sure everything follows together and makes sense, thank you.